Pecking on the keys:
the condor is endangered,
flown towards the sun.
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- Nathan Floom
- Bowling Green, Ohio, United States
- I'm a Creative Writing Student at Bowling Green State University. I hold that life is full of surprises and mysteries-whether that be from the world around you, or the people you meet in everyday life. Writing and literature are the best ways to explore the grand surprise that is life.
Is the condor pecking on the keys or the speaker? I love the image of an endangered bird flying towards the sun. I can't help thinking that "endangered" gets in the way of the image, though, and tries to say something political. A purer example might be:
ReplyDeletecondor
flys toward
the sun