In the dirty, almost empty bar, a band is playing. Blasts of sounds ripple clothes and dulled senses. A few people hang about drinking and swaying to the music. In a corner a middle aged couple exchange tongues and fondle one another, the youth surrounding them.
battered leather stools
support the young and the old
to exchange places
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This one I like a lot. It's got grit. I'd recommend trimming it just a little:
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battered leather stools
the young and the old
exchange places