Thursday, March 18, 2010

Tanka Poetry

1
Dim lights,
in an old bar.
Days last light-
fading as the
flies congregate.

2
To the woman,
her arms and ample chest covered
in indigo tattoos-
My friend is in love,
with your art.

3
In the chilled night,
a hint of spring blows-
through the dying city.
The absence of people
tells all.

4
Driving with the windows down:
The air rushing in
Complements the radio.
Erasing all fears of dulled senses-
Passing by a cop: all breath ceases.

5
A piss before bed,
Long lasting relief
in the steady golden stream:
the spoils of battles won
and foes of the evening passed.

3 comments:

  1. 1 and 2 are my favorites! They are very clean and strong.

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  2. The joy of bar hopping and the joy of spring finally awakening (not to mention the joy of ample chests) are perfectly intertwined in this. Thumbs up Floom.

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  3. Slight revision for #2?

    To the woman,
    whose arms and ample chest
    are covered in indigo tattoos:
    My friend is in love,
    with your art.

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